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we're well enough
to stand alone
holding own
past the cold

we're alive
together whole
stitched up soul
wings spread

we're gone
into night
leaving light
hold on

we're bled
run dry
time to fly
angel mine
There's something about this poem.
The last stanza.
Something that I want to make real with something. Somehow. Make it more whole.

I can't explain it.
There's nothing flashy about the poem, in fact I plan on moving it to scraps.
But I like it. And then I don't.

I can't describe it.
I'm fond of it, I guess.
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Angel-Spurs Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2008
Agreed. Something about it that makes your hand automatically drift over and add this to your favorites.

I don't know either, I just know that I like it. ^^
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xxvenit-anathemaxx Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2008
*laughs* Well thankyou, Mr Hand, for feeling that way!

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Angel-Spurs Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2008
*giggle* Most certainly. :giggle:
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cruentus-arcanum Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2008
Ooooh that reminds me of a book i read...
It's called Scar Night but I can't remember who it's by...
You should read it, it was quite good.
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xxvenit-anathemaxx Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2008
I should read it, sounds enjoyable.
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